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100WC - Week#11 - Paige

13/11/2014

I remember how I felt when my son went in the war I was that worried I couldn’t get to sleep all night .
In the morning I had a big surprise my son had came back early but it was because he had lost a leg and a arm so it wasn’t a really big surprise and he was in a wheel chair . So every second and minute he needed to be looked after he needed to be changed ,washed, even fed he could not do any of them things but I will all ways take care !

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mrswills1 Team 100

14/11/2014 01:39:45 pm

Greetings from Australia Paige. This is a good response to this week's 100 WC. Writing from the view of the mother of a soldier is an interesting view to take. You captured the emotion of the mother and gave an insight into how hard life would have been for injured soldiers and their families. I can see the effort you are putting in to writing complex sentence. But remember to re-read to check for punctuation (or ask a friend to help). I enjoyed reading your writing. thank you.

paige h

28/3/2016 03:27:39 pm

thankyou

Tracey in NZ (100WC)

20/11/2014 10:57:03 am

I loved the ending of your 100 word challenge Paige, a mum would take care of their child no matter how old they are! You have shown that you really understand what Remembrance Day is all about. Something funny happened when you typed your fullstops, commas and exclamation marks. I think you accidentally typed a space before your punctuation so watch out for that next time you are typing. Good work!

paige

28/3/2016 03:28:24 pm

thankyou

Demi

28/7/2015 06:43:20 am

Good Job Paige!

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